Draft:Battle of Multan (1007)
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The battle of Multan occurred in December 1007, between the Ghaznavid forces, led by Mahmud of Ghazni, and Sukhapala, the grandson of Jayapala, a ruler within the Hindu Shahi dynasty. Mahmud's forces won the battle, capturing Sukhapala.[1][2][3][4][5][6]
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Battle of Multan | |||||||
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Part of Indian campaigns of Mahmoud of Ghazni | |||||||
Salt ranges where Sukhapala was captured | |||||||
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Belligerents | |||||||
Ghaznavid Empire | Hindu Shahis | ||||||
Commanders and leaders | |||||||
Mahmoud of Ghazni | Sukhapala (POW) |